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Tears come out with every breath
Unable to speak or shout
I couldn't work it out
I lay still on the bed
Thinking thoughts in my head
It was easier to cope
When we didn't speak at all,
Is it wrong if I let it happen?
I doubt that.
Strong denial because I couldn't always say No
Where did all my strength go?
Tonight, the floor is where I'll sleep
I curl up and weep
About the things I have lost
For only my innocence it has cost,
My heart is breaking
Even though I didn't love the one I had
He just took something from me
He made me sick
I always wondered what made him tick,
And in the end
I'm broken
Even though, I'm always the guilty one
So I'll cry away
All the pain he has made
And hope that someone I can trust
Will come to my aid,
I'm NOT the one to blame
©2005-2010 ~PlaceInTheDirt
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Author's Comments

I'm sorry if this brings back any bad memories for anyone.. as it hits on a serious subject. But I feel like this needs to be written.

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~Sattiste Dec 6, 2005, 4:15:55 AM
Awsome piece. I could really visualize what you are getting across. Keep up the great work =)

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~thedarkenedlight Dec 6, 2005, 4:19:07 AM
Awesome.. I'd tell you how much I love this piece, but its hard to attach the word 'love' to a subject like that. Wonderfully done, the portrayal of emotions is brilliant.

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~PlaceInTheDirt Dec 6, 2005, 4:21:11 AM
thankyou very much.. This poem means quite a bit to me as you can probably guess. so I really appreciate that you liked it.

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~PlaceInTheDirt Dec 6, 2005, 4:21:57 AM
Aww thankyou! that's the kind of outcome I was looking for.

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~jokerboi Dec 6, 2005, 7:39:40 AM
its very powerfull...and noing what you mean...it makes it really disturbing as well

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Wear your heart on your sleeve, make my dreams hard to belive im not feeling this situation.
Runaway try to find that safe place you cant hide, its the best place to be when your me.
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~PlaceInTheDirt Dec 6, 2005, 7:41:17 AM
yes.. well I was doing some research on it and It made me very upset.. This may be a touchy subject but it needs to be pointed out

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~Silver-Shooting-Star Dec 6, 2005, 9:15:21 AM
MMMM - there is nothing worse than the feeling of being vulnerable :( and feeling like u cant do anything to gain strength...
I like how i can identify the topic here - but it also spells out lots of other topics too...UNFAIRNESS being one ;)

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~Kimberley Dec 6, 2005, 12:08:24 PM
I can relate so much :( Beautiful.

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"It is not up to us to decide the times in which we live. We have only to decide what to do with the time that is given to us."

I may be odd... but I *always* get even.
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~PlaceInTheDirt Dec 6, 2005, 12:10:56 PM
Thankyou. If you can relate then all I can say is sorry and I have a lot of sympathy for you :hug:

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